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Thinking of scrapping the current metal ox and redoing it. Yeah, totally going to. There's too much anatomy fail, I know I can do better. I do like the head, but the rest of it... nope.

I should just do a list of issues I have with all of them. RIGHT NOW. For posterity.

The boar is fine.

The cat is fine.

The rat needs to lose the butt swirl, the rabbit needs a pointy tail to go with his chest hair/pointed look. Also pointed ears.

Dog is fine.

Dragon is fine.

Ox needs complete overhaul.

Sheep needs some work on the feet and a tweak with the posture.

Snake needs better back patterns. Either better drawn or better period.

Monkey's design is fine, needs a thinker brow line. Posture in picture is kinda weird and there's some leg anatomy fail. He's supposed to be leaping backwards and swiping but I don't think it worked.

Rooster is fine design wise, but I botched the ink job so bad.

Tiger... needs something. Better profile for sure, rework on stripes. Anatomy could be better too.

Horse needs to be done period. Horses scare me.

Anything else?
  • Listening to: Through the Fire and the Flames
  • Reading: Nothing, anything you recommend?
  • Watching: The Paint Dry Channel
  • Playing: Guild Wars 2
  • Eating: Potato Soup
  • Drinking: From the hose out back
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~NoSignature Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks like a lot more to tweak or redo rather than "fine". What is the Zodiac Attack being made for, if anything specific? Or just because? I don't remember if you mentioned anything on that.
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*Furrama Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
At first they were video game concepts, now I just like having projects. At least most have issues that are easy to fix.
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~NoSignature Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, video game concepts are neat, but so are personal projects. Hoping it's worth it either way for you. I like a lot of them, especially the rat, even if you say it needs a tweak or two. And I understand the horse thing since you've talked about it before. Though I believe you'll come up with something good once you get to it. I beliiiiiieve in you!
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*Furrama Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think I mostly wrote this to justify a little gallery cleanup. Every time I saw the cow I just felt very sad.

The rat miiiight keep the butt swirl. I keep waffling.
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~NoSignature Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I kinda like the butt swirl for some reason. It's... cute, somehow.
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*Furrama Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The butt swirl shall thus remain.
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~NoSignature Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay!
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